Melvin The Detective

The suspisious detective, Melvin, walked into the dim room. Melvin looked around. His hair covered part of his face. The room was dark and it was hard to see. Melvin walked over to the window. Didn't he look out as though he peeked? His steps made a noise on the bare floor. His heart beat fast. Suddenly, he turned around to see if someone else was in the room. Nothing could stop him now.